The introductory video from Pat Pattison for Week 6 of my BerkleeMusic.com course entitled, “Creative Writing: Finding Your Voice” introduced us to the concept of pairing nouns + verbs in interesting combinations. Some of that has already expressed itself in my writing; however, we haven’t been focusing on that. Now, we are. For example, pairing ‘funeral’ with ‘exhaled’:
‘The funeral exhaled the stench of greedy family…’ ~Andrea Stolpe
‘The tsnunami exhaled the funeral onto the beach….’ ~Chanelle Davis
Tomorrow we start with various noun + verb combinations. I’ll try my hand at the funeral/exhaled noun/verb pairing.
The funeral exhaled its mourners out in a wispy line like a trail of smoke that snaked its way to the burial mound.